I want to move through the trees as you do: four palms flush to the earth
Every single line is exquisite
Just one of the lines to be proud of in this poem:
"When I was brought into the world, / I looked back."
Blows hot and cold. Very hot and inventive sometimes (wjat a pleasure!). And then from time to time, not. Just needs a tighter pull of the drawstring! Gary Michael Dault
Such profound closing lines.
Every single line is exquisite
Just one of the lines to be proud of in this poem:
"When I was brought into the world, / I looked back."
Blows hot and cold. Very hot and inventive sometimes (wjat a pleasure!). And then from time to time, not. Just needs a tighter pull of the drawstring! Gary Michael Dault
Such profound closing lines.