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A fine, moving piece.

I don't know what "shattered powerlines" means though. "Broken powerlines maybe (I know I'm being unbearably picky here).

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Well, I think yu're right to continue forcefully (past the power lines) into the poem's greater meanings. "Shatered" is indeed bigger than "severed"!

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