Spring by Ishion Hutchinson
These creosote tears you must’ve seen on a Kraków statue streaked with rain.
Spring by Ishion Hutchinson
in memoriam, Adam Zagajewski (1945- 2021) Cool as the breeze, spring comes and proves the proven blank which was sorrow a turbulent need, a healing. Who am I kidding? To say “spring,” and to say so on the front steps just after noon in the bright cool of the day, is a form of dissolution. How have I arrived at that? Your death is only two weeks old, sudden and tender as the buds on the firethorn returning and an old siren sound carrying on the breeze between two finches darting through shattered powerlines, cements a kind of comfort. I accept this. These creosote tears you must’ve seen on a Kraków statue streaked with rain. What arrives next is the marvelous phrase, “half sea, half land” (not yours but close) marvelous I mouth before I digressed, and then zoomed away to teach them, Adam, your “To Go to Lvov.”
A fine, moving piece.
I don't know what "shattered powerlines" means though. "Broken powerlines maybe (I know I'm being unbearably picky here).
Gary Michael Dault
Well, I think yu're right to continue forcefully (past the power lines) into the poem's greater meanings. "Shatered" is indeed bigger than "severed"!
Gary Michael Dault